Omg, I didn’t see yours, don’t feel bad!! I entirely just meant ‘oh Darlington’, not that it was ACTUALLY dumb. It’s ‘someone needs to put a leash on these boys’, which is TOTALLY in character for him (AND Pal), not ‘why would you write that’.

(Cf: Blue’s ‘I need to introduce him and Darlington...wait. Maybe that would be the WORST best idea.’ when she met Pal. Because she’s herded a nerd.)

I hope you know I wouldn’t be so glib if I actually had an issue with something you were writing! Also: would generally not HAVE an issue (and say it to Becca of all people, but AT ALL) about a plot point so minute and not affecting any of mine. ❤️❤️❤️